I have chosen my personal narrative. I chose this piece because I think I have done very well in many different ways. I believe that I have stayed on topic, and I have zoomed in on a topic. I believe I have also included true exact rich details. I have made sure that I have told the story in such a way that the reader can actually experience it from start to finish. I believe that I have shown the feelings instead of reading them. I have included multiple small moments. I believe I could have had a better and larger conclusion but mine is not that bad. Throughout this whole year I believe I have really raised the bar on my writing.
I have chosen my personal narrative. I chose this piece because I think I have done very well in many different ways. I believe that I have stayed on topic, and I have zoomed in on a topic. I believe I have also included true exact rich details. I have made sure that I have told the story in such a way that the reader can actually experience it from start to finish. I believe that I have shown the feelings instead of reading them. I have included multiple small moments. I believe I could have had a better and larger conclusion but mine is not that bad. Throughout this whole year I believe I have really raised the bar on my writing.
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